Wednesday, November 10, 2010

M3

      Today I'm going to meet the the first girl pharaoh hatshepsut with Lola. ya!  It is 4:45 AM. So I have to leave so I can get to lolas house by 5:00. When I  was on my way to Lola's house I seen some old man paralyze I felt so bad for him.
     I finily got to the house, we ate as fast as we can.When we got there the first thing that we wanted to see was the dayr al-bahri. It was so big, beautiful  and so many people wanted eat with Hatshepsut but she only invited lola and me. When I was in the same room with her she surved us fish and bread.yum!
     when we were talking she told me that she was born in 1502. Wow lola said in a very, very, very soft voice.what were you known for? I was know for being the first girl pharoh and I ruled for my  stepson Tutnoisis the third who was only five at the time also,  I ruled for 20 years and some great temples were build at the time.She said that she had to go because it was getting a litle to late. So I was telling lola that i would she her tomorrow.

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  2. I like the way you used paralyze

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  3. Glad you got to meet such an important woman from history.

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  4. I feel bad for the palatalized man to.

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