Wednesday, January 12, 2011

m8

       So today I found out that I have to go to war again, and last time I could have sworn  that I seen a zombie but is was just a guy, I guess. The zombie was scary, but he was helpful at war.  So I was forced  to prepare. As I was preparing for the big war I seen this long line.
       I kindly taped this guy on the shoulder and I asked him "what are you and these other people in line for?" He laugh and stared  at me then said to me "are you really serous?"  Yes! I said with all this confident in my blood. Then out of no were this guy comes and put all this stuff on me and said are you Isis, Isis Johnson? yes I am who are you? I am the leader of the pearsains, your leader he said. Are we going at war? Yes silly little girl we are going to war in......, never mind we are going at war NOOOOOOWWWWW!!!!!
 As I was on my way to fight I notice that I had a power to be invisable. So I used that power and I put all my power into it and then I shanked ten people. I was kind of feeling that we might win this war,and then I seen Ava killing people and being the boss on people. Then I thought of this nice stragety to go to the in the middle of the war and be invisable and kill the other and wow my stragety really worked. But I got stabed by this really long but thin knife I was okay and manage to get up, shake it off,and finish what I started. us Persains won and so I took all of out for pizza.

5 comments:

  1. I like how u used writers secret 2-1

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  2. Thats a really funny ending how someone stab you and then you getting up and be fine as if nothing had happen. Still good story.

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  3. Nice post! I agree with Krystal, the ending is great because you add in some humor and act like you go into battle like you go into a soccer game!
    I also like your writer's secret 2.1 and how you added in the delicious word.

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